Teh Wozzinator

this was originally going to be a comedy (hence the NAME), but i made it more serious when i was writing. enjoy! ~IN~the~LAND~of~the~PURPLE~MONKEYS~ ‘Twas dark in the forestland of the ...

Esme did a good job of editing, and I don't have time for a long edit.... I must say though: your wording at the very start confused me (although i ...

wow, your wording is amazing here!!! i must say, i was hooked immediately. this story is so awesome. (just try to keep it PG-13, please...) your wording and writing style ...

these are a couple of poems i wrote that both go by the name of "Willie the Goldfish". here's the limerick version: There once a goldfish named Will-ie Who was ...

my edits are in bold This is my first poem posted, hope you like it! Please tell me what you think! I'm not very good at writing poems on the ...

my edits in bold I'm not really sure if this is the right place for this but... This is something I wrote a few years ago, originally it was a ...

I noticed two grammatical errors, and those were just that you didn't put a letter in a word. Your wording was good most of the time, but i agree with ...

Well, I just seriously read through this as an editor, and except for a bit of punctuation that others have noticed I really liked it. Your wording was great, and ...

Haha, this made me laugh, but I agree, it's not very serious. What's with the monster? A poem like this might fit with little kids, but not a teenage girl......well......I ...

I think that the rhythm's off a bit here, but I'm not really sure how to fix it. What I don't understand is the message? I didn't quite get it.... ...

I think you did a good job, but the rhythm was off again. That's the only thing that needs work--I think that your subjects are really good. But I do ...

This was, um...Interesting, Matt. I really like your poems, you rhyme really well and they're funny. You rhythm was good, I thought. So no edits!

um, i have a question: why are all the "templar"s in gold-ish orange???? I'm confused.... Teh Wozzinator

I just read it and quoted it and got ready to edit, but as I went through I realized... I don't have anything to edit! This was a really good ...

my edits in bold (and since i don't think i've edited your stuff before...get ready for me to be harsh [probably]) Pablo was so great, I know to be with ...